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The city is a raw, open carcass.
I rip into it with my teeth,
tools and weapons alike.
We are bred from our surroundings;
I was born in August,
the son of Sirius and Sol.

Let me tell you what it is to be brought low:
it is a streamlined form of hatred,
to awake in unrelenting heat,
shoved down among vulgarities, drifting
as their glares catch you at every corner.
Is he a threat?
You can watch them drag their ribs through the dust
while you greedily tear into your scraps
behind cooking temple-blocks
(not the scraps they threw at you,
but the ones you fought for).
You're vicious by nature,
but wary by choice.


Asphalt ignites with my stride
as I stray down alleys and sidewalks,
listening for the chain-link's ring.
I can adapt to one-way tides
and dead-end names,
but my soles dig into the concrete
and I barrel down the veins
when I hear the sunset's sympathy.

The fenced dogs don't understand;
enclosed worlds don't appeal to me.
They don't dare invite me into their homes
for fear that I'd track the sunspots inside.
I'd far rather take my chances
and offer low growls through bared teeth
to the collar-men and their sweat stains.
It is a hostile way of life.
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The Dog Days of summer were once thought to be caused by the close proximity of the sun and Sirius (i.e. the "dog star") during the months of July and August.

"Hostility" is a theme that helped me complete one many of my other pieces.

Also, some days I just feel aggressive. I'm sure I'm not the only one.

Right?

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Edit: And thanks for the DLD!
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*intricately-ordinary Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is wonderful! I adore the harsh imagery in context. It gives an eerily personal feel. I also love the way you've spun normal ideas. "The fenced dogs do not understand; enclosed worlds don't appeal to me." Wonderful work, congrats on the DLD! :love:
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Eerily personal" not in a bad way, I hope. And thank you so much!
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*intricately-ordinary Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
All the best poems are personal, this one just happened to be on a whole new level.

Thank you for writing it! :heart:
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
In that case, my pleasure. :heart:
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~WritingObsessed Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. I especially love the last stanza. :)
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I appreciate that. :)
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*Hfeather53 Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I keep re-reading this to pick a favorite part. But I can't. Hostility and aggressiveness seem to be ways some people adapt to trauma. I'm pretty sure we all have our days. I know I have mine.

Wait, I found my favorite part:
They don't dare invite me into their homes
for fear that I'd track the sunspots inside.
I'd far rather take my chances
and offer low growls through bared teeth
to the collar-men and their sweat stains.

<3 Very well done.
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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I hadn't planned to include that last part with the final version of the poem, but something just spoke through me in a single burst of inspiration and I wrote it all down from nowhere. As always, I'm glad you think it fits well. :)
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*Hfeather53 Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow. I love the last part. I'm glad you included it.

>.>;

I like to imagine growling at people sometimes. ;D
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~Jacoooify Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic. Truly.
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